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UntitledIII
Contributed by
lost_in_the_darkness09
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 05:58:21 PM in AEST
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I couldnt live on without you,
Knowing that Ill never have you.
My heart has no reason to keep on beating,
If your heart is no longer living.
Everyday I cry,
And hope that you dont die.
Cause remember, if you die,
I die.
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Re: UntitledIII
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:04:23 PM AEST
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Small amount of words pulled at huge heartstrings, emotions running the part.
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Re: UntitledIII
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 04:20:05 AM AEST
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very emotional imaginative poem! i could relate too from this write.. its short.. but touched my heart.. well done..
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