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Time
Contributed by
TranceLover
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Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 06:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I need to get out of here
Tired of the same old thing
And I can't seem to runaway
For I have nowhere stay
Time keeps on passing by
& I keep on believing that things will change
That time wont let me stay this way
And maybe my dreams will come true
That maybe he will love me too
But time just keeps on passing
& I continue to feel like I'm not meant to be here
My existence seems worthless
For I was born in the wrong lifetime
I don't seem to fit in anywhere
My ambitions are always high, but no matter how hard I try
I get nowhere close to reaching them and I fail to make anyone proud
So, I stay up late at night and pray and pray for the impossible
But still I wind up waking up feeling like a failure everyday
I need this feeling to go away
I keep on thinking things will get better
Keep on thinking time will change, but everything just stays the same
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2006-11-24 18:21:48]
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Re: Time
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by ClancyExistential on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 07:02:00 PM AEST
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I can identify so closly with that, as I imagine every one who has ever loved can.
I know your poems sense of worthlessness and it almost breaks my heart.
It's tortureous to base your worth on the love from a man, who probably isn't able to love fully in return anyway!!!
Time heals all!!!!!!!!!
and sometimes, Love conqures nothing but ones perceptions blinding the truth, he wasn't meant to love you!
Keep writing, and never loose the ability to love, only sharpen it's eyes.
I'm Clancy (clancyexistential)
and I hope to hear more from you... :) |
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