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Laden
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:32:51 PM in AEST
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Sitting in shadows strapped torn and poor
fingers gouged as i tear at the floor
alone in a battle seems i will never win
burden heavy laden with sin
trapped in this box as people pass and stare
soul growing old energy growing bare
fingers pointed but what is new
laughing at others is so easy to do
shaking and cold i pull at my chains
exhaustion takes hold slipping to tame
staring at others with tear covered eyes
stuck in this shelter unable to see the sky
choosing solitude far deep inside
sitting in this corner to trapped to hide
cold in this shadow tired and weak
to tired to stand up and speak
Copyright ©
lostrelic
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2006-11-25 17:32:51]
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Re: Laden
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 08:56:38 PM AEST
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Cold in this shadow tired and weak
to tired to stand up and speak,
sent shivers.
A flowing melody of soft words and feelings, lonesome, sad and deeply touching.
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Re: Laden
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by brew on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 11:08:35 AM AEST
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Such depth in the write penned.... Yet so much sadness with a sense of loneliness... Good write, Regan....Such feelings that pour
Brew~ |
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Re: Laden
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:25:08 PM AEST
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Relic, Another very well expressed write here. Impressive.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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