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Pain
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 11:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pains reality runs far deeper~
than ever you could cut
Never even close coming~
were you to be like a fish gut...
Making of the scored flesh~
no more than a fear based lie
That in turn becomes the prison~
wherein true pains left to cry...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
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2006-11-25 23:35:59]
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Re: Pain
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:48:59 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem, as usual.
luvs ya!
.::Jess::. |
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Re: Pain
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by EddieDean on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:20:40 PM AEST
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Never let the pain turn inward, don't let it go inside and fester there. Nothing good will ever come from it, Im talking from personnal experience. Keep writing, it helps release those feelings you have inside.
We are here for you, forever and always.
Mike |
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Re: Pain
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 12:59:12 PM AEST
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Another very touching write, Kerry.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Pain
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:31:28 AM AEST
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I am browsing your poems again and I stumble on this poem. MisfitMe you inspired yet another poem from me. I hope your not upset and I do you justice.
No More Cuts
So cut away the pain
Free me from within
Throw the waste away
And put them in the bin.........
Peter |
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