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i wish for it
Contributed by
youngpoet69
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Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 04:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why is life so goddamn hard for me
i wish for it, for my life's ending
if i could do one thing different
it would be to end it
end my life, my emotions and pain
end the days in the dark cold rain
clear the storm cloud overhead
i wish for it, i wish i was dead
hurtful torture, angers agony
my life is like a ***** up symphony
out of tune, notes messed up
so with my life i had enough
comforted never, held by none
braved by many, hated by one
end this crying with one last breath
i wish for it i wish for death
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Re: i wish for it
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by detourchick on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 05:15:34 PM AEST
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u no wats funny just to like to turn compare us for a second u are sad and want to die
i have an aversion to sadness and want to live
i gotta say its a great poem but u should really enjoy life for wat is
i mean do u really wanna die and just go on forever as energy ?
and regret forever the fatefull decision of taking those pills or cutting ur writs
enjoy what there is to enjoy
watch family guy ...find new frineds
hell go get drunk ! |
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