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Fantasy
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detourchick
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Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 05:11:39 PM in AEST
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Fantasy
By Jessica Cohen
Weary lids fall to block out the light of the earth
My possessed mind slips into my subconscious
A World of dreams appear
Dragons, wizards and stars
Trials and journeys lay ahead of me
I shall be tested as I venture into a land that lay beyond the natural world
No calm oceans await me in my sleep
My trouble mind gives way to nightmares
Black nights along the dark countryside
Lead to creatures that rise from the shadow which I must defeat
No doubt metaphors, that represent
The troubles of the day
As dinosaurs chase me through jungles
I must run light -footed to stray away from their bite
I awake after falling off a cliff
Fatigued and discontented
Hours of luminosity are upon me now
What adversity should I expect?
What will dive into the deepest caverns of my mind,
Only to come out when the moon shines bright
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Re: Fantasy
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:41:48 PM AEST
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| A brialliant account of the courage we must muster to face daily challenges! how clever to portray them as such that are reflected in our dreams that always prepare us for when we wake! I like it much. :) |
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Re: Fantasy
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 12:48:39 PM AEST
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beautifully lucid...
and i dont know but:"What will dive into the deepest caverns of my mind,Only to come out when the moon shines bright" ..i sure hope you write about it!
love n' hugs nessa
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