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Black Chariot
Contributed by
The_View
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Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 10:16:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Standing on pavement
Caught in natures breath
Watching through the night
A sight Ill never forget
Your black chariot silent
As you glide on home
Fading into the darkness
Leaving the rest behind
Despite the foreshadowing
Our story didnt end
Not the way we thought
Leaving me at a loss
Now, at my crossroad
Another indecision entangles my fate
Uncertain strides, keeping me here
Falling behind, nothing clear
Wishing I could follow your black chariot
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2006-11-27 22:16:53]
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Re: Black Chariot
(User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 11:06:32 PM AEST
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Thought provoking to say the least. But for me to have some insight here for you it needs to come out of the shadows a little more. Still nice write!
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