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The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
Contributed by
sadaddy
on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 11:11:27 PM in AEST
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There is the sun
Who wakes me up for another day
That brightens each and every day
There is shine
Who shines so bright in the evening sky
That keeps me dreaming of better tomorrows
Then there is the light of my life
Who is always there when I am down
That has this gift of lighting the way
Without these three
I could not be
This is the sun, the shine
And the light of my life
This could only be my family
Who always brightens my life
With every passing day
Copyright ©
sadaddy
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2006-11-27 23:11:27]
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 12:48:39 AM AEST
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I loved this. What would life be without these things and people in our life to brighten the path.
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 01:00:11 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write and really appreciated, I'm sure.
huggs,
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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i agree with Emy and Michelle
what a beautiful write |
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 06:54:50 PM AEST
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A very nice write
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by tearstained_soul on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 11:00:42 PM AEST
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1st off, thatnx for commenting on my poem, "please dont hate me mom"
2nd. this poem is very sweet makes me wish i felt the smae.... me and my family dont get a long too well (lol) anyways, i love ur writing style!
kisses
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Re: The Sun, The Shine, And The Light of My Life
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 08:42:03 AM AEST
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Oh man, POPS,
I love it... A far cry from the rest of your work and
a much more appealing side of you (the other side
makes me sad for ya' my friend)... I am glad you
have light in your life my friend... some folks do not
and that is what gets me through life...
Thank You for writing this and write some more like
this...
BEAUTIFUL!!! MAN!!! JUST BEAUTIFUL
Thank You
Bill
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