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Peace of soul
Contributed by
FinnCutes
on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ive always thought
Were looking at this same blue sky
That theres sunshine after rain
I breathe just to be alive
Im trying to move on
Im trying to live
And the next time Ill be able to forgive
But the next time it wont be me
Im lying in the dark
And there you go again
Breaking my heart
Breaking me down
And take it all away
You take it away
My peace of soul
Well, Its not just an another empty day
This time Im about to break
Still hurting from your emotions
Still feeling many regrets
I dont know anything to say
Its like I dont have nothing to say at all
Copyright ©
FinnCutes
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2006-11-28 07:27:53]
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Re: Peace of soul
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 07:46:38 AM AEST
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beautiful write, filled with so much emotion and pain
it feels spoken from the heart and right to the point
I loved it! (as always)
Welcome to YPDC
May your soul find healing
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
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Re: Peace of soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 08:35:30 AM AEST
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| Good start, keep it real! ** self promotion reference removed from comment ** Moderator_18 |
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