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Pulse of Thunder
Contributed by
the_wampum_pimp
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 09:49:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pulse of thunder,
Curse my vein,
Fear no blunder,
Fear no pain.
End it all,
Begin anew,
Again to fall,
Once more to you.
My midnight queen,
I hate your love.
The cursed unclean,
A bloodstained dove.
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2006-11-28 09:49:24]
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Re: Pulse of Thunder
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 10:51:11 PM AEST
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A terse spell to break. I like this and imagine freeing that dove and watching its flight hearing the conclusion of Spock "Logic is the begining of Wisdom not its end" against your poems preface and I agree sometimes logic must suborn and render tame 'Love' especially the wild flame of it.
Peace
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