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I Just Don't Understand
Contributed by
Ari
on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:11:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I just dont understand
You kiss me
Softly, sweetly
Sending shivers down my spine
Sparking a fire in my heart
I just dont understand
I say
You say
Neither do I
I just dont understand
Then why
I dont know
You say
As you leave
Something began
And it was over before it could start
I just dont understand
You kiss me
Your lips say not now
And your head says
Never
I just dont understand
You didnt even tell me
Playing a game with me
I am no game
My heart is stronger than my head
Or is it the other way around
I just dont understand
These days anyway
I kiss you
Try to anyway
And your gone before I say
Why
Well talk again
I just dont understand
Why not now
You kiss me
And your gone
Copyright ©
Ari
... [
2006-11-28 22:11:16]
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Re: I Just Don't Understand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on
Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:35:30 PM AEST
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I know this poem rather well.. I was like that with someone... but I don't regret being like that.
Eternally Punished,
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Re: I Just Don't Understand
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by musicXisXlife on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:04:16 AM AEST
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| Wow. I love how you keep repeating "I just don't understand"...making it known, and just, well done. This is really good. |
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Re: I Just Don't Understand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:54:07 AM AEST
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Somehow the repitition of the "I just don't understand" is both good and bad.
It seems to drive me crazy or even to the point of annoying, and yet somehow that very emotion works itself into thew poem as being right.
You made it work!
Great job!
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