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Paradise in the Sky
Contributed by
ediii
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Tuesday, 28th November 2006 @ 10:51:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Look inside the tear she dropped,
there is a surprise.
Fighting that green cloud of snow;
no challange - no prize.
Look inside the mind that's clear
-this is killing her.
She is present but she's not here.
Does anyone care?
Look inside her eyes you'll see
her sitting on a cloud.
She inhaled and raised up, free,
laughing out so loud.
Look up to the sky you'll see
her flying up so high.
Her life is happy, full of glee.
Paradise in the sky.
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ediii
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2006-11-28 22:51:04]
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Re: Paradise in the Sky
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 12:23:42 PM AEST
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I have tears in my eyes reading this. Bringing peace to a soul who has lost many this year.
Beautiful doesnt do this justice.
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