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kiss and make up
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 08:55:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i need a little more then you are willing to give
iv tried surviving on what you offer me to live
it has failed me and left me all alone
the correct decision will inevitably be shown
i can only hope to have chosen it all along
i can only wonder where you have gone,
and if you plan to return
i stare into mirrors whose reflections tell me so much
gives me insight into reasons
allows me to understand the lack of trust
a refrained touch
i miss the both of us
in a hast and abrupt
a goodbye
and you hung up
your voice trailed into dust
as the dial tone replaced words of love
talk to me once more
i need your ears
give them freely
to your liking i will adjust
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2006-11-29 08:55:06]
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Re: kiss and make up
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by MandiLee on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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| WOW your poem is soo good!! |
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Re: kiss and make up
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by brew on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 08:57:55 PM AEST
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WOw.what strong feeling peened and laid out.......Beauty of words.........Sorry things have fallen, I know all so well.but we have to pick up, and go forth.!
Hugs for you
Brew~ |
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