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Alone with a cigarette
Contributed by
eazy6886
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Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 01:09:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Alone with a cigarette
Sitting unaccompanied with that cigarette
Thoughts going throughout my mind
Soundless laughter appears past each thought
Memories of all the dim-witted things
I have done and said
Cigarette smoldering downwards to my fingers
More thoughts become perceptible
Tears emerge, tears of happiness
Extraordinary memories come to mind
Which will last a generation
Thoughts of unforgettable happiness
Advancing down the cigarette with warmth on my fingers
Anger emerges to the surface
An anger formed by varied illusions
Thinking about how I could have done it differently
Hating myself for the dumb mistakes I have made
Cigarette has come to a conclusion
With my fingers burned
I come around from this daydream
Thinking in my opinion
On how powerful someones mind can get
When smoking unaccompanied with that brainless cigarette
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2006-11-29 13:09:00]
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Re: Alone with a cigarette
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by DrowningInKarma on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 03:58:07 PM AEST
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| This is a great write....made me visualize myself when alone with that dimwitted cigarette...great word choice. love this writing |
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