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SORROWFUL_REGRET
Contributed by
ruthie1983
on
Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 01:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Turbulence I sowed,
Every minute getting torn with emotions,
Wishing I could turn back time,
To get one more chance with you babz,
Not to draw conclusion on things,
Not to drive you crazy till you leave me,
To be patient and take one day at a time,
I wish you could overlook my fault,
Care for me like you used to,
Babz, frustration drove me crazy,
I was only trying to love you,
Not understanding your world,
Drawing conclusion on my thinking,
Not trusting or believing what you said,
I sit here crying wishing you take me back,
I swear you persevere enough,
BUT I cannot accept it is over between us,
I just cannot take it,
I still believe we have a chance together,
One day I know you will come back to me,
I swear it is not over yet,
It cant be,
I still care deeply for you,
Only I do not know if you still care babz.
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2006-11-29 13:22:13]
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Re: SORROWFUL_REGRET
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:48:48 PM AEST
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| The word "babz" was a bit too repetative. It also seemed a bit rushed to be sincere. But I did like the attempt. |
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