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Razor
Contributed by
intoxicatingkiss___x
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Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 11:37:45 PM in AEST
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How i long to feel the touch of a blade
Running along my skin
Letting the blood run free
Like a rush
I can never stop this sweet escape
If only the blood could stop flowing
So i could get out of this eternal darkness
That haunts my thoughts
The icyness of the blade running through my skin
A crimson blanket running over my body
Dripping like water from a tap
The relief spinning round my body like a drug
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2006-11-29 23:37:45]
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Re: Razor
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 03:15:33 AM AEST
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*shivers* like the memories of an old lover brought back by the sudden smell of his cologne....that brought back some repressed thoughts and....well, i wish it didn't since it's going to haunt me, but i guess that's what it was, a brilliant and haunting write.
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