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father time
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 09:31:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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what would happen if the spotlight went out
and everyone was left in the dark?
time would stop,
and everything would fall apart.
what would happen if the music stoped
and noone could hear?
time would stop,
and everything would be to fear.
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2006-11-30 21:31:00]
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Re: father time
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by tearstained_soul on
Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 10:45:40 PM AEST
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hey! i get to pop your comment cherry (SWEET) lol... ok, that wasnt the only reasen i wanted to comment on your poem, i pormise (although it was a big part ;-) lol) i think it's a very short, but good poem and "what would happen if the spotlight went out
and everyone was left in the dark?
time would stop,
and everything would fall apart." is my favorite part so keep rockin and writing i very much enjoy reading what you have to say |
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Re: father time
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by tifrob on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 04:17:05 AM AEST
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It gives you something to think about.
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