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pure and perfect
Contributed by
spiritwind
on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 03:10:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Fine lines
lost time
counting minutes
never get it
ramble on
note the song
clinging tight
leave the night
snap and break
love forsake
light and dark
dark and light
lost and found
tied and bound
inside a storm
love forelorn
give and take
snap and break
where it ends
is where it begins
round and round
polish the crown
falling down
get back up
no excuse
then we lose
all to start
allover again.
where did it end
where did it begin
love or lust
hate and sin
light divine
polish the shrine
mix and mingle
body tingles
stop and go
fast and slow
wacky race
leaves no trace
when you strive
for purety and perfection
doesn't exist.
try again!
Copyright ©
spiritwind
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2006-12-01 03:10:16]
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Re: pure and perfect
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by recklessguy on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:28:17 AM AEST
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SW, something about this went through the realms of such realism. Try again, yes girly people today are always looking for that perfection that never comes. Impressive write. ( grumbles at the fact so little comments on this)
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Re: pure and perfect
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:43:29 PM AEST
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Your metric delivers here as an inoculation against expecting too much...Its alchemical from your experience.
Good Job
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