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No Forgiveness
Contributed by
pam
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Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:42:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A look through your eyes
at the decieving beliefs
looked on by such terror
and malicious deciets
once a world so enrobed
by beauty and trust
now a revolving trigger
pulled by each one of us
how did we let this beauty
go to such hell
without even knowing
our greed put us under its spell
now we must pay
for the wicked betrayed
led by each fallen soul
and the evil we saved
Copyright ©
pam
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2002-07-29 06:42:13]
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Re: No Forgiveness
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by chatabox on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 06:45:30 AM AEST
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phew! Pam....you are right.
excellant write, look forward to reading more. |
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Re: No Forgiveness
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by pam on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 02:56:11 PM AEST
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| Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. It is truly a great feeling to know that someone understands how I feel. |
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Re: No Forgiveness
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by Kassidi on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 03:15:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful write pam, so poignant. I am also looking forward to more poetry from you. Good Luck, and Lovely poem!
Kassidi |
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Re: No Forgiveness
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 07:50:03 AM AEST
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Another powerful piece...I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry
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