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Tumble On
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:09:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Moments streaking
Ever forward into nothing
Blank screen of mind
All connected by thin thread
Web of remembrances
Lives together enfolded
Past, present, future
Humankind lost in song
What was may be again
As spiral continues
Nothing changes
But all is different
Images float on winds
Of storms yet to come
Still we hold strong
Connected to the earth
While imagination flies free
Twisting and turning
On hope and doubts
As we tumble on
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-12-01 12:09:54]
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Re: Tumble On
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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Loved the down to earth softness of this write my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Tumble On
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 12:45:51 PM AEST
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| lovely soft write :-) |
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Re: Tumble On
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by ever1der on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 01:01:08 PM AEST
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"Web of remembrances" I LOVE THIS LINE.
and I agree with everyone about the soft feel this write has.
Good Job!!! |
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Re: Tumble On
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 09:27:13 PM AEST
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"As we tumble on"
Nice Shari, very nice. I loved this. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Tumble On
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 11:52:13 PM AEST
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Dearest Shari~ I have missed you so my dear friend. I too, have missed your beautifully ascribed masterpieces. As always your work has such depth to it. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for posting it~
love, hugs n prayers
sue m |
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Re: Tumble On
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 09:45:57 AM AEST
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This was a good poem... I liked how you wrote it and I like the flow... Beautifully done...
Take care
Christina |
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