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A Bachelors Longing
Contributed by
yangdantien
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Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:14:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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For you I shall green await for springtime,
the springtime of your loving
when you desire
nectar from pollen
I shall be sweetly awaiting
burgeoning in silver life-force
blooming dreaming
of your gold joy prolonged.
I shall blue build a craft to steer
the roll and wave of your pleasure around
the world, sun and milky array we shall
take sanctuary within pearly gates
resting to renew our red foray.
Crossing mommas and flutter balms
knowing many, loving some
bearing song to our marrow
well hum, freely bitter-sweet.
Our time mirrors track and rail
and all the workers who came
upon morning rise, eyes squinting
from the sun and beams
shining paths for root and bees
in mellifluous chimes,
the wind caprice ameliorates
to call along.
Attuned the bloom slumbers
dreaming of cures for
diabetes, sterility and survival.
The fit test: who ever makes
the most babies rear
to spawn themselves
ultimately wins?
Yes I will be gray waiting
as a fruit plucked fresh
from this Poem-tree
ti's my white delight
against the dark illusion of separateness.
AJPIII
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yangdantien
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:47:09 AM AEST
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...and you are a, "Bachelor" why? Are the women in your corner of the globe soooooo blind then...something in the water? In all seriousness now, I love how deep you are...& while I don't always, " get it " right away, I love that I'm always compelled to go back & try!!!
~Kerry Lynne (Flyin' solo today)
P.S. Now, about those mashed potatoes...well, we can exchange recipes later. Wink! |
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by emystar on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 01:04:01 AM AEST
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Sounds like you already have an admirior.
Very beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:51:50 AM AEST
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Ok Aj,
now I must say I love how your mind and your heart work. Geezzzz . I melted reading this one into a puddle right where I sit.
Beautiful, tender, lovely and spellbinding to say the least.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST
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AJ, You are a master at word play. A bachelor indeed, who will be the lucky one to get you, my friend? I felt like I was drowning in a sticky syrup and it was sweet as hell. Loved this.
(Goes and fans self)
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 06:35:40 PM AEST
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AJ~
A Bachelor~ that's really sad :-(
For who could not possibly love an extraordinary guy like you dearest AJ? You are a most passionate soul who is so giving of his beautiful heart. Who so ever captures your heart shall be the envy of all women who walk this Earth.
May you find the one whom your heart truly desires my dear friend. Wishing you the best of wishes always dearest AJ~
With love n hugs from ur devoted fan~
sue, the infinite dreamer
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:06:35 PM AEST
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Hm sometimes, it may seem we dont have anyone in our life, yet, they are straight in forn of us, and we didnt even know, it.! Your ords were beuatiful......very in heart in them......Loved it
Brew~ |
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 08:47:00 PM AEST
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I find it pleasantly interesting that it is poets of the female
persuasion that have dropped a comment on this, your longing ~
I love how you wove colour throughout the write .. bringing
the image to life that much more brilliantly .. time and fate
are the most peculiar of lovers, no? When we have all
that we desire they seem in perfect harmony .. but OH
how they find themselves in the midst of a quarrel when our
dreams and wishes resist manifesting ..
exceptional write here, AJ. I enjoyed this one very much.
time will be kind .. and fate, (you will find), shall kiss you
softly when you least expect it. This I know to be true ~
: ) *smiles*
~Breezy
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Re: A Bachelors Longing
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by needledancing on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 10:23:49 AM AEST
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| If one has no expectations then one has no disappointment...who pray tell could fill the expectations after reading such a beautiful piece....anyone who has a heart. It is rare a man can reveal such passion...but obviously possible. Thanks Yang |
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