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Contributed by
midsummerdream
on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 06:24:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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to those who will listen
let your minds drift
my poem's not sweet
my words are not kind
to those who will listen get ready for war
youll hear what I have to say
but not what i mean
to those who will listen my pain is very much real
you know who i am but not how i feel
to those who will listen please hear my cry
send a light to my shadows to rescue me
to those who will listen dont get me wrong
because my life isnt all pain
im not sure whats wrong just
maybe ive gone insane
to those who will listen i feel im wasting my breath
for nothing will change until i find death
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2006-12-02 18:24:30]
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Re: untitled
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:29:53 PM AEST
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i read it as if i was the angry poet
and i lliked it
nice write
catz |
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Re: untitled
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by tin on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 10:12:21 PM AEST
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| i hear what you say and i know what you mean. i wish i could offer some advice, but i haven't found a solution to the problem either |
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