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dream
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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someday when the buldings crawl into civilazation
and the moon begs for night
we will create a new nation
when birds would die for flight
one full of hope and wonder
one with all the answers
so there are no questions to ponder
and we sleep on the toes of dancers
we will call our land dream
and everything just is
where minds sing
and we beg for death's somber kiss
this land is not fake not one bit
and i have one more thing to say
there is nother like it
so will you go or will you stay
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2006-12-02 23:00:54]
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Re: dream
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by silver_crested_shadow on
Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 11:49:09 PM AEST
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| nicely written, and what a dream good write |
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Re: dream
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:28:15 AM AEST
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You captured my heart w/ your poem for, " Brother Bryce " but, w/ this one you've officially won my fanship!!!Good job!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: dream
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 02:19:46 AM AEST
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an incredibly beautifull write.
It reaches out and grabs the reader.
What I find fasinating is living on Planet Earth in the Phycical body but living in the spirit.
See I came from a Protastent back ground and years back this little lady kept talkin 'bout heaven. Soon she passed on. I realized I had heard her say the same from an infant. She was a very sweet lady but in her death I saw that she spent so much time yearning for heaven that she didn't take time to live.
I no longer do religon but I'm totally into God! No doubt of that.
Luv, (God) is a thing we should all be. If my spirit is eternal then I have nothing to fear here. Heaven is constently open to me.
Great writing and you've written a beauty here.
Sorry you just inspired me and well ya know, we writers write.
Hugg, luv, joy, peace to you-n-yours,
emy |
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Re: dream
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 11:55:19 PM AEST
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| nicely done. i loved it....you say we will call it dream? ....*looks apon the land of dream, and steps forward.* ....i will stay... wonderfull write..lol. |
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