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Escaping Memories V
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 07:09:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Within a womb long thought barren, she was conceived~
An heir born late in the lives of those she'd succeed
Happy & healthy on the kings knee she was bounced~
While to the world outside she was a miracle announced...
'Til by a disgruntle few was given to rise~
That which brought the first of many tears to her eyes
Of dabbling in black arts the Queen was said at fault~
And thus, other worldly magic her babe from result...
Just one of the shadows to be on her birth cast~
Which had the servants crossing themselves as they passed
No respect for their King & Queen showed the realms peers~
Soon aging them both beyond already great years...
Surviving to know of her own barely seven~
Before sent to burn in Hell, by God in Heaven
At least that was what most were given to believe~
By those who would see her of rulership relieved...
Once again
To be continued...
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Re: Escaping Memories V
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 11:54:25 AM AEST
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Good writing. The story is very intriguing. I must see if I have read all the other pieces to this. Thanks for sharing what your mind holds.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Escaping Memories V
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:29:06 PM AEST
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You work has the metric of the memory keeper the griot that can sustain for hours and hours thousands and thousands of years of histroy...
When I read this i can feel myself infused with sacred drink around a fire and taken on a journey to the stories of all of us...
There is both light and dark in this piece which has a breath waiting scope...
Peace
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Re: Escaping Memories V
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 07:02:16 PM AEST
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Kerry I love the way that you are able to entertain your reader with your terrific poetry.
One is always captivated and intrigued with what you have written or are going to write next. I wished I had half the skill that you do my dear friend. Thanks for sharing your wonderful work with us~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Escaping Memories V
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by shelby on
Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 08:49:38 PM AEST
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A captivating mysterious write my lady.
You are inventive and talented. Pleasure to read.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Escaping Memories V
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 05:07:23 AM AEST
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i love this....epic in its depth, a story in poetic form....simply, a masterpiece. thanks for the read.
SM |
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