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Monologue of Life
Contributed by
NDean
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Sunday, 3rd December 2006 @ 01:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The World is full Of the mismatched languages of life. The Trouble and Strife In the twisting vortex of Heaven on Hell.
As the bell tolls For another break of freedom People should stop and think Get their heads together to understand The Complexities of Life The Universe And Everything
42 People on the roads to their offices Run for the Starbucks To drink the energy down In the centre of town Ready for anything the falseness of the world Throws at them
Schools around country Full of stress In the bliss of the lands known as Your school days are the best youll ever have. Dont waste them.
The name the lands have Is not a lie
The tables creak Squeak Like mice in a queue to the movies Full of anticipation And consideration fills the air As memories pass by like Flies In a small breeze
Then Its over.
And the world can work peacefully again Flittering around their busy lives Like the Jenny Wren Because worries are no longer passed around Like Telegrams
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-03 13:55:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Monologue of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Errious on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:41:49 AM AEST (User
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Cool. I like this poem. I think the link to the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fits in well! Good imagery. The elipsis at the end makes it sound like there's more. I like it.
Put on the storm poem.
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Re: Monologue of Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by epsftbllchic1617 on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:49:02 AM AEST (User
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I really like how this poem talks about how people are so busy and hurry and rush through life, then when its over, there is time to relax and be at peace. Good job! |
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