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this is me after you
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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just when I thought I was over you,
an old song we made love to
played and the tears welled up in my eyes
memories of all my pointless cries.
so i held in the tears and shook the memories away
felt so silly that night begging you to stay,
but now i seem glad youve gone
but the memories creep in and i'm done..
how was i so foolish to fall for those lines
or was foolishness the tie the bindes,
heaven help me from wanting you again
thats a battle i know i'll never win.
you were everything to me for a while
now i'm left to force a smile...
it hurts me like hell
but know one will be able to tell
The smile will stay on my face,
and i'm shake off any trace.
that i still love you and need you here
but as i sleep i will feel the tear.
Cuz what i should of said,
will dance in my head
and i know i'll heal in time, but you'll never
you'll never find a better heart than what i had when we were together...
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brokenwings
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2006-12-04 02:22:50]
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Re: this is me after you
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by an3n on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 04:01:55 AM AEST
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| i like the thoughts u put on this poem...they re tottaly exactly the kind of thoughts someone thinks at these situations...that makes ur poem more real. |
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Re: this is me after you
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by Saloni on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 08:54:57 AM AEST
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keep strong!!
well written with expressions & emotions
keep posting! |
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Re: this is me after you
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:36:09 AM AEST
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nicely done...i know this pain all too well,
wiz |
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