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Reality Shattered
Contributed by
the_wampum_pimp
on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 10:38:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My world, a spinning crude gyration,
Haunted by hallucination,
Demons raising ululation,
Giving praise to desolation.
Now sanity is rendered blind,
By visions cruel, dark and unkind,
And breaking ties that used to bind,
The fragments of my tortured mind.
Deep into the dark descending,
Shapes and colors blurred and blending,
Rapid images offending,
Until consciousness found ending.
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2006-12-04 10:38:00]
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Re: Reality Shattered
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:44:14 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED 9IT REMINDS ME OF POE) SO DARK IT PULLS ME IN AND I COMPREHEND....... I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING |
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Re: Reality Shattered
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by NDean on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 02:44:57 PM AEST
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Very cool. I love the rhyme scheme, very effective. Its hard to be able to use some of those more complex words effectively in a poem
Well Done
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