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love
Contributed by
youngpoet69
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Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 04:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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how i watied oh so long
anticipating this time all along
waited for many, yet picked out by one
went and saw alot, and now i found someone
looks don't count, well at least be decent
not who i expected especially out of the recent.
someone so fun, makes me feel happy
puts a smile on my face, and makes me keep laughing
we'll see how it goes, how it works out
and of the days we're going to keep count
see how long this lasts,
will it be forever
or just as long to learn a lesson
hope it lasts forever.
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youngpoet69
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2006-12-04 16:23:21]
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Re: love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 02:00:24 PM AEST
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i like this write.. its very optimistic and you can feel the newness of the relationship for you.. awesome write on it though.. like the flow of this and good luck with your relationship
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