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Tell Me
Contributed by
crow
on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:49:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I knew you when
I would chase every rainbow,
every bridge so far.
Remembering Me in pieces
never good-bye
you had been there all the time.
So many nights
when my heart lie broken
Tell me my love
were you mine.
Every tear,
if they would filled an ocean,
every star in the sky.
Every word I had left spoken,
all I had let go by.
Tell me my love,
I knew you when..
if I could change each moment,
tell me you would have been mine...Crow
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Re: Tell Me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:55:32 AM AEST
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Such softness in this. Brought tears to my eyes. Brought back many memories as well.
Like saying goodbye as you drove off into the desert sunset. We have already spoken of that though.... I am now rendered speechless.
Love ya
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Tell Me
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 05:03:44 AM AEST
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very touchy poem!
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Re: Tell Me
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 09:26:54 AM AEST
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wonderful soft I like this one
Shari |
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Re: Tell Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 12:13:21 PM AEST
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Crow, This was so sweet and juicy. I liked the read. Left me with a little smile....especially the ending. The what if's man, they kill ya. Great bittersweet write.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Tell Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:51:25 PM AEST
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very good write. i liked the flow ofthis poem.. well expressed thanks for sharing
JENNI |
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