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DONT TAKE HIM FROM ME
Contributed by
MARYCORTEZ
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Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 07:32:06 AM in AEST
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Once again Im believing in you
God hear my prayer-let this dream come true
It took so long for me to love once again
But the faith I got is something that wont never end
All the times I was hurt-asking you why
Just wasnt loud enough-because I got no reply
See lord Im tired-could you keep that in mind
Ive sacrificed so much-is there happiness Ill find
Hes so good to me-and my kids always smile
Its been so long-since we had that in awhile
Ive done your work-accepted you in my heart
Show me that you notice-let today be the start
Allow me the honor to become his wife
My being is yours-and Ive dedicated my life
Let the anger go away-and all the hurt end
Youve already made me pay-for all of my future sin
Keep us safe-from all the harm thatll come
All there is to be punished for-youve already done
Give us our children-Lord well be a family
Ill finally live again-Please Dont Take Him From Me
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Re: DONT TAKE HIM FROM ME
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:47:06 PM AEST
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very interesting write.. it sounds like you are in doubt of your faith.. keep the faith and hope in Jesus.. he only wants what is best for you.. things may seem bleak but you must keep the hope.. without hope there is nothing. God will take care of you but you need the faith..
I like how you expressed your feelings within the poem.. its a very good write thanks for sharing.
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