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A Word So Simple
Contributed by
JoeyTrib1550
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Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 08:21:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So unnecessary.
You know its a given.
No need to say it.
None at all.
But all the same,
Every time,
For some unknown reason,
It fills me with pleasure,
Knowing I have,
To some extend,
Pleased you.
And maybe,
Just maybe,
Repaid but a little bit
Of what youve given me,
Which I hold so precious.
But all the same,
Ill never ever know
If youve even intended
To give what I received.
Because I never ever
Say as you
Thanks
Copyright ©
JoeyTrib1550
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2006-12-06 08:21:38]
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Re: A Word So Simple
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:17:05 AM AEST
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wow i like the way you made a poem out of gratefulness.. awesome job andi loved the flow of this.. thanks for sharing.. great job
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Re: A Word So Simple
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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For understanding:
Maybe you don't realize it without really getting into the poem, and reading it thoroughly, but it's actually about love
It's about the one person ((A)) always thanking the other for all those wee things the other does ((B))
Though (B) enjoys doing them, for s/he is in love with (A)
The ironic thing is that (A) will never know of the feelings of (B), for s/he never thanks her/him (ie never tells) for this great "gift" as you might say, which is the feeling of love, because (B) doesn't know if (A) has ever intended to give what (B) received, and therefore is too scared to tell (A), due to the possibility that (A) could take it from (B) again
It's all there in the poem if you read it carefully enough
Though please, if this is just too much to ask for to be interpreted into this, please tell me
If that's the case I might have to alter it to make it more clearly (I know it isn't obvious, but I want it at least to be possible, to find it after reading it a couple of times) |
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