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A Neoteric Monadic or Muse
Contributed by
pooper
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Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:18:51 PM in AEST
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Lord, I sometimes stop to ponder
What hallucinogenic drug you're under
What other reason could there be
Unless you're trippin on LSD
For making such disastrous slips
You must be having some bad 'trips'
Why else would things be in such a mess
Stop putting things to an acid test.
Upon a time you chose to speak
Have you now then passed your peak?
Are your children not attendant?
Or, do you take the fifth amendment?
C'mon Lord let's hear it now
We can't drink of milk from 'sacred cows'
Hey! you there in the firmament
Do you condone the establishment?
Or should we now put our faith
In members of our human race?
Are you a grown ups security blanket?
We're not a child to reward or spank it.
C'mon Lord you're losing face
We're traveling now in outer space
If you don't soon kick your habit
Your power goes to those who'd grab it.
C'mon now Lord get off the pot
Uh, wait I'll give it some more thought.
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Re: A Neoteric Monadic or Muse
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:06:58 PM AEST
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What a brave rant.. it has a questioning and mad upward glare...Really well done terse effective sentences wrapped around a huge 'nut'
of expression.
I dig man tellin' the Man about the man... (snaps fingers to hidden ryhtyms)
I am sure you will post again soon just to show everyone you were not struck down for such poetic boldness.
Peace
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