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IT
Contributed by
NDean
on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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It stirred
Gently at First
Like a Foreboding Curse
In Monotone Verse
As it lured
Its Prey
To the Shadows
Crying to the Wind
In quiet succession
And Procession
Of its new Possession
The Creature jittered
To a sudden Noise
In the Shadows
As it hollered
And Followed
Its Dream
It seemed
Only the dawn could break the silent hum
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-07 12:40:50]
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Re: IT
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by shelby on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST
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intense write and loved the pattern and flow to it as well.
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Re: IT
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 05:46:18 PM AEST
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Great write...
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Re: IT
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 02:49:09 PM AEST
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i like the flow of this piece and how it gives you an errie kinda feeling.. very powerful piece.. great job.. thanks for sharing
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