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Broken Wings
Contributed by
trackiller2006
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Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:40:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I crawled underground digging a tunnel
Not knowing how far the tunnel would go on
With my soil-covered shovel in one hand
I was searching for you
As I gathered up patch-work happiness and sowed it together
I was crushed by your strength
Burning
The scar on my palm that won't go away
Ripping through the gaps in the red clouds with my tattered wings
Finding myself, the one who can fly
Where will the eternity I drew while I was in my cocoon,
Put out its bud and open its flower?
The morning eventually brings back the night
Captivating me
Moonlight
I believed that as I searched,
My arm would get tangled with yours and I'd find where you are
Burning out
You will not come back to the place we promised
Running through the black earth in shattering pain
If I can't hear you scream
I want you to crush me in your hand
While I can still call myself "me"
Your arm holding me back becomes silent dust
I just quietly held up my hands
Knowing that my life is over, I walked the world alone with my broken wings of destruction unfurled
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Re: Broken Wings
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by blindchoice on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 06:46:39 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. Thank you ever so much for sharing this with the world. I love it and will forever be a fan of yours. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Sparkz16 on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 08:07:48 PM AEST
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| wow..kinda explains how im feeling a lil bit bout sum1 i love it your such a great writer never quit writing your magnificent |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 12:35:24 AM AEST
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| the title caught my eye because it is what i call myself.. and the words caught my heart this was a beautiful poem, |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by Sasha on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 12:09:33 AM AEST
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| Excellent work.. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by krittermacc on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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| Very deep. Great Poem. |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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| wow..nicely done. i loved this. ;) |
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Re: Broken Wings
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by JJAA_91 on
Friday, 12th November 2010 @ 09:40:33 AM AEST
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| incredible. not much more can be said really |
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