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Ana's Girl
Contributed by
bmurph
on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 11:22:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I tried so hard to smile
Face myself with truthful eyes
But too much pain and loneliness
Were screaming in my mind
I tried to find the comfort
Some strength to get me through
And looking down at my empty soul,
Ana,
I found you.
Things were going great at first
You knew everything I knew
Never have I had a friend
That treats me like you do
Sometimes I couldnt help but cry
From what you expected of me
But then I came to realize that you were just
Supporting my big dream
Other times I hated you
For how you made me feel
But I must admit I owe to you
Making my life feel so real
I know how much you hated
Me gaining some weight
And when I opened up my mouth
For that tic tac that I ate
Ana, I am sorry
If I ever got you upset
But you were always one
To forgive and not forget
I know I had to make it up to you
Maybe lose fifteen more pounds
And once all my bones were showing
We would wear that golden crown
The honesty made us grow closer
And during times of stress
There was nothing more I wanted to see
Than us looking our complete best
I know how much it makes you proud
To see my ribs shining through my clothes
The happiness you give to me is all
I want to know
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bmurph
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2006-12-09 11:22:58]
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Re: Ana's Girl
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by Teusday-Moon on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 04:29:01 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is really great. I'm a bit speechless. You've shown a lot of emotion in this poem and composed it perfectly. I know a lot about Ana and this sums it up. |
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