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A Swallows Tale
Contributed by
yangdantien
on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 03:01:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Gasping, joking, are you
choking the chakra again?
Hacking the jugular
and carotid jungle
pulsing nerves and
deadly capillaries
with canopy crowning
the bloom of mind.
Eves apple actually
handy larynx
to the heart streams
swirling pools in babies;
blue ascended green.
Blackened and blocked
by age and all the
lies we tell ourselves.
Poem cleanse
wings flutter spirits
fanning soul
in candor breaks;
the dust of
brittle speech
taints the ear with ash
listening becomes phoenix.
So Hermit rescue
spent seven years
in quiet...
just a razor tip
and ink made
from gall and comfrey.
Tattooed every inch
in sutra & scripture
let bare only
the throat
which has no shadow
for false stories to hide
under.
Preparing for winter
in the last year
scouting for fallen
timbers to warm
and live.
Cords cut by hand
the ax bit into a trunk
that screamed.
The bark flesh bled
and with all muster
bending to whisper
''Sorry'' the wound sealed
in greens sprouting.
The wind rustled
leaves danced to
a song of inspiration
''Love'' was uttered next,
the log took root,
began to bloom
and bear fruit
AJPIII
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Re: A Swallows Tale
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 09:25:01 PM AEST
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Will read again & again & again...& enjoy each & every time as w/ each will come futher enlightenment as to the meat of this piece. This, I know as this was my experience w/ both, "the Hawk King" & "Cosmic Blood" which, I have fallen in love w/ again & again & again...
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Re: A Swallows Tale
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 12:46:02 AM AEST
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Incredibly deep, awesome, incredible writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Swallows Tale
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:20:51 PM AEST
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hey AJ~ you know I wished more people would comment on your work~ You're a true
poet who has the incredible ability to write such excellent and descriptive masterpieces.
Well done my dear friend and keep up the
brilliant work~ It's always a pleasure to read your outstanding poetic verses~
Shimmering brightly as always.
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
Eternal, Infinite_Dreamer |
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Re: A Swallows Tale
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:20:59 PM AEST
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Well you bring words that are penned to life with atotally , differ meaning.....Such flow, such, art......Im in awe with what I am reading. Sorry, I have been writing for sometime, yet I AM NO WHERE near what you are.....I just stopped for awhile, and now trying to get back on a new left path...lol...Sorry Im a lefty, and that was sarcasm...But you have to laugh once in while.Oh btw Im Brew...aka Dayna
Brew~ |
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Re: A Swallows Tale
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by Nirvana12 on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:11:11 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, I do have one question though and it might make me sound like an ass but i dont care really. What is a chakra? |
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