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Ocean Gust
Contributed by
NDean
on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 08:17:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Pleasant Breeze
Uttered itself around the sea
Being Brisk like any little wind should
To make it pleasing
For the locals
It did anything it could.
It splittered the waves,
In Quiet Awe.
Against Auks and Puffins on the cliff
They Flittered Slightly
Squawking at the wind
Bustling to utmost faze
Kites
Wobbled under invisible force
Within brilliant sun-source
Filtering itself across the lands
In Unknown creatures hands
Across the moors
To further discovery.
Black Crows
Guardians of the Unknown Magic
Are attacked by the Pelagic Winds
Winding itself around
Feathers and Down
Manipulating Ornitho-Gown
As the breeze grew
To a unrelenting gust
Flying across New Realms
Of Wonder
The wind of the sea overwhelms
The Elms of the land
Flicking branches around
From the White Clouds
Metaphorical Army of the elements
That, my friend, is the way
Of the ocean wind
It builds
And fills the sky
Like a oversized butterfly
Coming from elemental
Cocoon
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-10 08:17:42]
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Re: Ocean Gust
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by Errious on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 11:10:14 AM AEST
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Cool poem! Flows well. I like the imagery and emotions that you have created. Well done.
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Re: Ocean Gust
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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Thanks for the kind comment.
The last section really sums everything up nicely. I love the title too. |
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