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Little Breaks
Contributed by
goodandevil
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Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 05:04:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It's the little breaks that matter
It's the little breaks that grow
It's the little breaks that weigh my heart
and stop the blood that flows
It's the big breaks that we notice
It's the big breaks that we treat
It's the big breaks that we share
with every new love that we meet
But it's the little cracks that mattter
It's the little cracks that kill
It's the little cracks that weaken
the ice even when we're still
It's in the canyons of the big breaks
in the shadows of our fears
that lie the little breaks
collecting all our tears
Copyright ©
goodandevil
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2006-12-10 17:04:25]
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Re: Little Breaks
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 05:12:13 PM AEST
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| i really like that last stanza, it's pretty original and beautifully written. great writen. |
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Re: Little Breaks
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 06:40:17 PM AEST
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This counts as a twofer as I am enjoying this read with a friend & enjoy this is what both of us did. This has a great flow that makes it easy to read as evidenced by my friends comment that, "even I got the rhythm immediately". Good job...write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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