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more than a one night stand???
Contributed by
myloveispure
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Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 09:54:44 AM in AEST
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Re: more than a one night stand???
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:17:27 AM AEST
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Don't be so hard on yourself...Everything happen for a reason..Very nice write..
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Re: more than a one night stand???
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:27:17 AM AEST
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very powerful and very well expressed.. I can understand your feelings .. and as hony56 said don't be so hard on yourself. there was probably a lesson.. i hope this guy ends up calling you back and you guys hang out and get to know eachother better.. but very good write
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Re: more than a one night stand???
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:44:42 AM AEST
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| I'm sorry you had to go through that, but it is a nicely written poem... |
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Re: more than a one night stand???
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:04:10 PM AEST
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Learn from what you feel is a mistake.
As far as the give me head part and the word whore, I cant believe this has not been deleted from the homepage.
Sorry you are so hurt by what you did.
I think though this was a little to much information with your words.
I had one deleted a couple weeks ago that had none of this wording in it at all. I am confused.
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Re: more than a one night stand???
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by Ratwick on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 07:00:00 PM AEST
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Good poem, but I hope for your sake (no offence whatsoever) that you know that Dream, That Neverland, That Love is far more than a bj. All the best for you! And keep writing! That was clear, and very well written!
Write On!
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