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Calm
Contributed by
NDean
on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have thought too much today
My mind has broken down
Like a Clockwork Orange
Strumming images into my mind
Like Wasps about a Bee Hive
Every Night I toss and turn
The quilt explodes
In ravenous rage
As though I only release my
Anger once my soul has
Cooled Below
0o Kelvin
My structure
Churns
My very being in enclosed
Enslaved even
By the calmness I must
Envelope
My voice with
The very nature of my words
Is Ensnared
By Bear traps
I have thought too much today
I must relax
I must sleep
I must awake
To a new
Brighter
Dawn
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-11 14:44:51]
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Re: Calm
(User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:57:14 PM AEST
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cool poem. I like how the phrases at the end give the impression of relaxation. And I think the very end is good too.
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