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Water, Sand and Grass
Contributed by
NDean
on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 03:02:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Look across the Water
Sparkling
Each segment of glitter opens
Portals
To Worlds of wonder
And exaggeration.
Look across the Sand
Glowing
Each particle of dust closes
Vehicles
For the soul
And the Body.
Look across the Grass
Flowing
Each blade of green moves
Memories
Back to where
They Belong.
Copyright ©
NDean
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2006-12-11 15:02:48]
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Re: Water, Sand and Grass
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:10:41 PM AEST
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A beautifully penned poem you have here. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks so much for posting it~
warm hugs,
dreamer~ |
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Re: Water, Sand and Grass
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:57:34 AM AEST
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| Your words speak to me with pictures that makes sense and understanding. |
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Re: Water, Sand and Grass
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by RLSS on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 01:04:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful and elegant.
Turns your mind's eye so that you see these things just as you describe them. |
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