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Reality
Contributed by
notaprettygirl
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Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i sit on these cold steps
blowing smoke rings in the dark
going over every single detail of your face
that's so vividly etched in my mind
you were nothing less than a goddess
so beautiful that i wanted to bottle you up
tuck you away in a safe little cocoon
hide you from this horrible world
that tried its best to scar you
nights like this fill me with so much wonder
all the maybe's and might have been's
flicker through my mind in tiny flashes
then the wind picks up, begins howling in my ear
it never misses a chance to remind me
how cold i'll be tonight sleeping alone
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Re: Reality
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 01:22:48 PM AEST
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| Yes reality can sometimes hit us hard,great write! Christina |
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Re: Reality
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:43:07 PM AEST
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| ooh...so sad...but so beautiful...you have such talent in your words...beautiful... |
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Re: Reality
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by notaprettygirl on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 08:36:24 AM AEST
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| thanks wyrd & low. :) i'm glad you both liked it. take care always. ::big hugs:: |
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