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The Meeting
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 02:30:05 PM in AEST
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Good evening masked one, and what do I owe for this honor Phantom,
Youve traveled to the dark side just to see little ol me,
Here in this perverted mind of mine, is no place for your kind,
Turn and walk away, the world will lose a great poet if you stay,
For years now youve spread your lies and deceit, its time you and I took it to the street,
I see a fist fight with words, have I got that correct sir,
You dare face me, then the death wish you have will soon be received,
I do not fear you Kane, and nothing you could do will make that change,
All the rumors, all the pain have failed to drive me insane,
Youre a simple chapter with in my book of life, and Im ready to fight,
So be it, arm your self with everything youve got, a fight may be what youre asking for, but a war is what you will have fought,
Enter the darkness, swallow your fear, say your prayers and fight back your tears,
In my world you do not exist, youre a broken man hidden behind a mask,
Youre a fading light on this poetry site, youve lost the desire, put down your pen and just retire,
And so it begins, Kane running off at the mouth again, doubting my ability, well heres my answer are you ready for me,
Nothing you say and nothing you do will have me afraid of you,
Dont you think this rival has grown stale, once youre confronted you tend to bale,
You strike from behind when one is unaware, but understand Kane, Im still here,
That you are, but not for long, once I strike your will to fight will be gone,
Your death will be by my hand, and I shall laugh as your blood spills upon this land,
The battle of good-vs.-evil takes a twist, Phantom and Kane entering a poetic abyss,
To Be Continued
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2006-12-12 14:30:05]
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Re: The Meeting
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by Ratwick on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 03:09:30 PM AEST
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An excellent poem! One of the best I have read on tis site! Hurry up with next parts! Thanks for posting!
Write On!
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Re: The Meeting
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 04:35:45 PM AEST
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My money is on Phantom...excellent write looking forward to the rest of the battle
Shari |
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Re: The Meeting
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 08:51:54 AM AEST
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ooooo I am glad this is a duel in words.
I felt heated actions within these words and you did a great job writing this. I will be looking for the rest of it.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The Meeting
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:56:47 PM AEST
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beautifully written:) i hope you are well dear friend, miss you:)
love n' hugs nessa xx |
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Re: The Meeting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:44:36 AM AEST
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Okay, gotta admit that I was going to start by reading The Confrontation but when I saw it was the second part of this I definitely felt I had to come read this one first to get that full effect.
Definitely an excellent write and I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for posting it and now I am off to read the second part.
Tim
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Re: The Meeting
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 10:00:55 AM AEST
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Because I was not here when you posted this, I read these out of order. I really am enjoying them though! I look forward to the rest..
Take care...
Kara |
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