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BLeeding Valentine
Contributed by
RavenEnsued
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Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 05:19:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It doesnt matter anymore
How much I hurt and feel
There never is anyone there
To help me completely heal
So what if Im supposed to be happy
To laugh, smile, and not cry
Oh, havent you noticed?
Ive just died a little more inside
Theres blood all over the paper
Its as dark as this black ink
Just ***** off, dont worry
I left the razor in the sink
My scars wont heal the way I want them to
But its only because of you
Dont worry it doesnt hurt as much
As it used to when I thought about you
Look in my trash can, the broken razors
And hope you dont miss the red-stained toilet paper
Im on my fourth one, God Im on a roll,
Lets just hope that they dont call poison control
But why should I waste my time
Writing this stupid rhyme?
Oh, look there he goes,
My bleeding Valentine.
Copyright ©
RavenEnsued
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2006-12-12 17:19:28]
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 05:53:39 PM AEST
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wow very sad and powerful write.. you can feel the sadness in this.. awesome job in expression and i loved the flow thanks for sharing
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by lyddie on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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very good .i really enjoyed :)
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Re: BLeeding Valentine
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by Xbxg32000 on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:12:27 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem. I really enjoyed it :). |
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