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Empty...
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:59:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Empty...save for the concept of time~
moment after moment keeps tickin' away
Not unlike the age for nursery rhymes~
when the fate of innocence, becomes that of prey...
Empty...save for the concept of love~
embrace after embrace is sought to in hide
Not unlike the hollow cold comforts of~
the secret dark places in which once cried...
Empty...save for the concept of life~
day after day in this world by passes
Not unlike the woman~child turns wife~
still suffering her body, yet to turn ashes...
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MisfitMe
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2006-12-12 19:59:20]
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Re: Empty...
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by Ratwick on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 08:25:08 PM AEST
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An excellent poem! Though the save fors show that its not so empty after all, cos those are the things that fuflfill our lives dreams! Glad you can see that!
Write On!
Peace
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Re: Empty...
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:48:16 PM AEST
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Gracefully Nature abhors a vacuum and the airs of poetry gives rise to fill as the "Empty" is expressed...
May You be Abundant With Healing Love and drink the Ambrosia that beckons the Muse...
Peace
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Re: Empty...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 06:00:20 AM AEST
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Dearest Kerry~ your poetry always moves me my dear friend.
May your life always be filled with the joys and delights to warm your beautiful heart.
Keep penning down your emotions for you do an excellent job at expressing your inner thoughts & feelings~
love, hugs n prayers,
eternal, infinite_dreamer |
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Re: Empty...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 08:48:01 AM AEST
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A stunning write and I may just mirror everything said above.
I felt many different emotions reading this.
Tender and touching.
Michelle |
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Re: Empty...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 05:36:34 PM AEST
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For such a title I expected somethin' empty. But this is so full of thought provocation and insight! Very good!
wabl
KenMoore'
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Re: Empty...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 10:28:04 PM AEST
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Moving is a good word here.
This is just so sad, full of heartbreaking emotion....and perhaps wisdom too... |
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Re: Empty...
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 10:03:56 AM AEST
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This is a most touching peice Kerry. Your poetry says what i feel but keep hidden. I
know empty only to well, Beautiful karma
these writtings of yours give me. They are
most comforting for a rainy day person as
i have been known to be. Take care friend.
((((MM))))
Ben |
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