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My love, remember me.....
Contributed by
ravisada
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Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 11:57:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can remember when I met you
Love become more than you could love me
Your taste of kisses made me to feel so high
Life without you become no meaning for me
My love, remember me when I am gone away
You cannot hold my hand any more
Though, my heart be still as loving you
But gone far away from you into the silent land
I can remember all those loving words you told me
Love become an everlasting dream of you
Your taste of beauty made me to hold your passion
Soul without you become no life for me
My love, remember me when I am gone away
You cannot hold my hand any more
Though, my heart be still as loving you
But gone far away from you into the silent land
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2006 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2006-12-12 23:57:18]
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Re: My love, remember me.....
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 12:49:12 AM AEST
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A heartfelt and lyrical poem...
Drenched with the spirit of longing...
Well Done
Namaste
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Re: My love, remember me.....
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 03:30:27 AM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My love, remember me.....
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by lyddie on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 12:07:52 AM AEST
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very good i can relate 2 what ur saying
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