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Can't Hold It In Anymore
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 08:48:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You stand there grinning
I can't help but loath you
Your arrogent cockyness
Your burning eyes
I just want to stab you
Make you bleed
Make you cry
I want to hurt you
Like you have to me so many times over
I want you see you squirm in your own guilt
Fear me, Josh, fear me
Because I'm afraid that next time
Will be your last time to mock me
Because I can't hold my anger in
Anymore
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desolantdreamer
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2006-12-13 08:48:00]
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Re: Can't Hold It In Anymore
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by myloveispure on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 09:17:50 AM AEST
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wow...well it is obvious that you are angry i hope that everything works out well,hopefully not to the extent where something bad happens like your poem says.
good luck,keep writing
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Re: Can't Hold It In Anymore
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:58:36 AM AEST
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I can feel your anger towards this person, but take if from me my friend, don't keep it bottled inside. Nothing good will ever come from it, its done too much damage to my friends and family for me to keep it inside anymore.
If you truly feel this way towards this person, tell them, and if they keep mocking you, then avoid them. Don't drop to their level.
Good work, keep it up!
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Re: Can't Hold It In Anymore
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by lyddie on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 12:03:30 AM AEST
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whew good poem...let it out
lydia |
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Re: Can't Hold It In Anymore
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by angel_baby_no_more on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:54:00 PM AEST
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| wow you have some serious talent and you know how to express it too... i love your poem... |
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