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deceit and deception
Contributed by
dantoad
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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there is a note under the mattress
it says stuff she never dared to speak
about how all the things she was known for
were really just bad lies
she never lost her virginity to the out of towner
named tommy, like she told all her friends
and that one boy who followed her like a puppy
she never won a spelling bee in the fourth grade, like she told her sixth grade classwhen she moved here
in an effort to fit in
and her boyfriend's name wasn't whatever she had said, she had been single
until that mark kid asked her out
since he thought he could get some
she kinda wishes she could tell her mom
that when she said she had never did that with a guy
she had lied, so she wouldn't be talked about
because her aunts do that kinda stuff
the gossiping, and then the cousins talk
so now she wants to free her soul
from all the lies that tie her down to the ground
she is bearing her soul
for all us to see
without a care in the world about her appearance
but who cares now? she's killed herself anyways.
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dantoad
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2003-02-19 11:20:00]
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Re: deceit and deception
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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| so sad, but well said |
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Re: deceit and deception
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:34:04 PM AEST
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| this is so sad...please don't kill yourself... |
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Re: deceit and deception
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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| Wow Lies are so painful at times I hope for better days! Good sad write!Christina |
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Re: deceit and deception
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:30:52 PM AEST
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| very good poem. Please dont be so sad. |
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