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Releasing Emotions
Contributed by
errious
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Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 03:59:15 PM in AEST
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How do I express these emotions I have
Inside when they rage and burn
Scolding my thoughts and the way I feel
Do I shout and throw things
And smash things up?
Or swear and drink and say whatever I want?
Do I cry in the corner and think about things
Banished from normal thought?
Do I write a song?
Ive tried to write a song
But I write poems
They help
I could talk to friends but would they understand?
Or family but neither would they
But I talk to myself the only one
Who really understands
The man in the mirror
Hes so sad but understanding when things happen
He and I can talk about it
Confide in each other
But how do I banish the feelings and hate
That reside within me
I need to release them
But how
I sometimes shout and swear
I sometimes cry and allow my thoughts to enter
Restricted areas of my mind
I sometimes talk but only to
Myself
I sometimes write poems
Just like this
A poem that releases the trapped emotions in my heart
It helps
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errious
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2006-12-13 15:59:15]
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Re: Releasing Emotions
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by BSteel on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 04:22:57 PM AEST
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this is a good piece ive been through it brother, we never really leave it,
it is what it is, maybe when we focus on ohters and less on ourself pain will show us a lesson and lessen, until then continue the good work of expressing, rememeber all thoughts are scary yet sacred, all thoguhts are shared endowed from the creator,
peace brother,
sincerly,
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Re: Releasing Emotions
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by NDean on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 07:37:57 AM AEST
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A very good poem. I feel it sums up the meanings behind your other poems.
Well Done
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