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Confused Boy
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 06:25:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I dont want my own Zelda
Fitzgeralds foolish game
while I understand his heart
I sure dont want the same
I want a heart
I long for art
not some twisted law
I just want life to start
My quarter life crisis
so much time I waste
pursuing a hopeless dream
when loves all I want to taste
Summers on its way
plants wilt more each day
friends refuse to wake
no-ones got anything to say
Here stands a confused boy
bottled thoughts I cant share
giving all the love I have
just asking for whats fair
No, I want no Zelda
but Ive already held her
Im just a lost lover
with Fitzgerald as my elder.
13/12/06
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Re: Confused Boy
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on
Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 12:23:43 AM AEST
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| Very deep and emotional but sad and I love the way you use Fitzgerald to explain what’s going on. Wonderful, wonderful, I like everything about this write, and the more I read it the more I understand and like it! |
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